In the worthlessness that was the aftermath for me
while you did your fly.
In the warm slimy liquid trickling down my inner thighs
from your forced entry, my natural wall caving in.
In the muffled sounds and silent screams I could only manage
as I felt my virtue leave me.
In the scars etched on my skin when your "ginormous" hands
tore through my clothes.
In my innocence as I happily downed the laced drink
that weakened my defenses.
In the "trustingness" of parents who took you in
and made me call you uncle.
In society's noncommittal to my plight and that of many like me.
Hell found me in my naive, vulnerable self
Now my dignity is ablaze.
Ayodele, @itz_aweezil
Pain in words. Nice one
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful piece. Great art. Subtle message.
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DeleteDamn Ayo. I felt every bit of it. Well done bruh. Well done.
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ReplyDeleteAwesome stuff... Mirror of our society paying less attention to abuse. Keep it up bro
ReplyDeleteSuccinctly summarized. Thank you sire.
DeleteThis is a great peace bro. Good balance between being poetic and passing a clear message
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DeleteThis is a great peace bro. Good balance between being poetic and passing a clear message
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DeleteMehn.. Words can't explain how true and realistic this is..i feel so sorry for victims of such filth.. Great piece.. Maestro
ReplyDeleteYou've taken the words outta my pen (not mouth this time). It's so sad that our society is giving little or no attention to "victims of such filth." Thanks man. Always supporting the dream.
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ReplyDeleteAwesome piece. Very deep. Thumps up
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ReplyDeleteYou keep getting better. Successfully painted a helplessly painful scene, not with brushes and paint, but words. This piece made me really sad. Well written.
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